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I dreamed your arms around me
though I could'nt see your face
I felt whole
in your embrace
a carress of your hand
so gentle and sweet
making all the pieces of my life
complete
with a simple touch
how can that be?
how can you set my heart
and spirit free?
it's like I've been sleeping
dreaming my days
but suddenly I'm waking up
in so many ways
my eyes are finally opened
to the world around
every sight
every sound
all the things
that have passed me by
I feel as though I
have the wings to fly
all this brought about
by the written word
no eyes to see
no voice heard
no hand to touch
except in my dreams
has my imagination gone wild?
or is this what it seems?
I'm praying something special
is about to start
because although I haven't told you
you have my heart
©2008-2010 ~ElendilDarkstar
:iconelendildarkstar:

Author's Comments

This is the first poem I've ever written like this. I guess I was never properly inspired. I hope you enjoy it. Let me know either way

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:iconstrawberrydragongirl:
I feel you did a WONDERFUL job. The poem flowed very nice and you also expressed so much emotion.
:iconelendildarkstar:
Thanks. I'm terrible at judging my own poems
:iconsewnsymphonies:
you pulled together a masterpiece in a hard style man
props

--
"I've never believed in the term "Unconditional Love." Because not only is it as ironic as a "Civil War", but as a utterly devastating. But, like a war, it is ultimately necessary, and for some odd reason, mean are addicted to it."
:iconintradermal:
Aww.. thanks. I really like it. You are too awesome... If I do have your heart, I'll have to find a safe place to put it. I tend to lose stuff... expecially if I put it in my purse. lol!

~*Tabitha*~

--
If you like what you see... take a look inside my skull...

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:iconelendildarkstar:
you knew you did before I told you about my dreams lol
:iconintradermal:
That is may be so. lol And?

~*Tabitha*~

--
If you like what you see... take a look inside my skull...

[link]
:iconelendildarkstar:
and you had plenty of time to find somewhere better than your purse. lol I'm putting in a new one soon
:iconstrawberrydragongirl:
We all are our worst critics!

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